This is shaping up to be an interesting effort.
You might want to take a look at Blogging's Three Cores: Discover, Read, and Write, which contains some excellent ideas from fellow judge Phil Wolff. You might also want to look at Shel Israel's 12 tips on Giving Great Presentations and Doc Searls It's the Story Stupid for good advice on distilling messages.
Judith reminds us of the 'Perfect' Corporate Weblogging 'Elevator Pitch' Competition. Go on, take that ride :
Have you submitted your Perfect Pitch entry yet?
The rules of engagement for this contest are listed in: The Perfect Corporate Weblogging Elevator Pitch Competition, which was posted on March 29, 2004.
We have the honor of hosting this competition with an awesome group of internationally respected judging panelists:
danah boyd, Dave Pollard, Dina Mehta, Don Park, Elizabeth Lane Lawley, Flemming Funch, Jason Shellen, Jim McGee, Lilia Efimova, Martin Dugage, Phil Wolff, Ross Mayfield, Scott Allen, and Ton Zijlstra.
So submit your entries soon as the deadline is Midnight [EST] April 15, 2004!
Please submit your entry to: pitch at weblogsinc dot com. Thanks! (-:=